Loves Confusion

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Loves Confusion

Afraid of life, to love, to live
afraid to take,
afraid to give.

Afraid to fall in love again
afraid to lose,
afraid to win.

Afraid and scared
alone, confused.
Afraid to win,
afraid to lose.

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kdarcy commented on Loves Confusion

08-10-2010

Fear in any form for whatever shouldn't control us, yeah I know its easier said than done. With the admission, it can now be conquered ahhhhhhhhhhhh, to love again, be well, nice statement of rwhat really is the root problem

Qualin commented on Loves Confusion

08-04-2010

it was 115 degrees today a friend and I went to eat and there in the middle of the parking lot was a cat drinkin water that had to be 125 degrees I couldn't stand it so I went inside the resturant and got it some cool water and chicken,hamb-steak,and fed him he came right to me but wouldn't let me touch him..what has this to do with your poem..you mat be asking yourself..he was afraid to come to me at firat altho he wanted to through desperation,he ahd to live ...so he had to eat..and he after tasting the water was very satisfied...some time we have to make the first move even at the greatest of risks...in the end God is there still in controll...he sees every sparrow when he falls HOW MUCH GREATER ARE YOU MY LADY !!!!Dropped off afraid and scared but heor she what ever had to live...as cousinsoren says "this is the dat God has made be glad in it!!!! I seen a book in your short write very good and i feel from the heartand Love the dog...too much that is a book I could erite ..the Love of my dog...one said "there is nothing to fear but fear itself...your friend Qualin depend on it!!!!

Crush

08/23/2010

nice insight and story, qualin. you are right.

gogant commented on Loves Confusion

08-01-2010

A summer's day love can be confusing......but never true love. Hey, MM, man does not live on one poem alone..........you have the knack...so let them role..............This is a grand poem.........gogant

Mandi commented on Loves Confusion

07-03-2010

Fork over the dog, lady! I recognized this poem. It 's good, but you need to write more....You must be bored. Did you read some of my poems. I've been on fire lately.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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