Si es que todavia estas aqui

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    Si es que todavia estas aqui
    En mis suenos te apareces
    caminando lentamente asea mi.
    Yo sigo durmiendo tranquila
    esperando que ese sueno no tenga fin.
    Murmuro las letras de tu nombre
    conectandolas hasta que llegen a ti
    y te espero
    si es que todavia estas aqui.

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    jptennis123 commented on Si es que todavia estas aqui

    03-28-2009

    Bonito poema. Corto pero significativo. Gracias por tu comentario sobre mi poema.
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    Grito commented on Si es que todavia estas aqui

    03-22-2009

    Palabras de esperanza.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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