SEXY YOU

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SEXY YOU

Passions ignite
You say my name
One touch from you
I go insane
Heart beating faster
Clothes hit the floor
Soft sensuous lips
Hand on my thigh
Feeling the heat now
Of two becoming one
Flesh upon flesh
Breath of my breath
Adoring the nightlife
Penetrating the dark
Recurrence of loneliness
Here in my heart
Candlelight faint now
All is now still
The bed is half empty
And so is my soul.

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HarverTomsson commented on SEXY YOU

11-25-2009

So much for the bliss of spontaneous coupling.....It's usually the woman who picks up the bill.

Rhymer commented on SEXY YOU

11-23-2009

You certainly can paint a moment of passion with your words. Including the climax when one has left the building.

Artie commented on SEXY YOU

11-23-2009

Wow I like the strong passion in this piece! You have captured many emotions - 10 from me

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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