Severity

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  • Dark Poetry
    • Mikek77
    • Writing "works of the mind" again after so long

    Severity
    Lost the Damned May Be
    Through Hell You May Walk
    Hell, No Place Like Home
    You Came Back
    When None Else Could
    Yet You Have Found Its Consequences
    The Consequences Will Stay
    But The Body Will Walk On
    No Salvation To Those Who Came Back
    Is This Severity Or Serenity?

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    Khoko commented on Severity

    05-19-2009

    I liked it. Great! But it made me feel sad. Most of us are happy to go home. I'll keep coming back and reading more.
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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