Seasons of Images

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    Seasons of Images
    Bubbly blue skies
    a yellow sundress
    the sweet smell of watermelon
    Summer
    crunch of leaves
    yellow, red, orange, brown,
    light hooded sweatshirts,orange plump pumpkins and fragrant spices
    campfires, smoke, singing
    Fall
    thick Ice, fat snowmen, puffy winter parkas,
    the scent of cinnamon ,packages with big bows, parties, scented candles
    wishes
    Winter
    Brightly colored tulips, green mossy hillsides full of clover
    open-toed sandals, porch swings, flashlight tag
    rain
    Spring

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    lightcourier commented on Seasons of Images

    03-21-2009

    Using the seasons as a punctuation mark. Good style.
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    arfin09 commented on Seasons of Images

    03-01-2009

    suggestion: perhaps stating the season PRIOR to the lines would make it easier to read. I got off track in the 1st stanza, then had to re-read to have it make sense. Keep writing!
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