My Life is a Zoo

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    My Life is a Zoo

    My life is a zoo,
    people pass by, watch, and even stare,
    they see but don't actually care,
    they come and go,
    just to see the show,
    always moving never stopping,
    constantly gawking,
    I feel trapped in a painting,
    almost to the point of fainting,
    I am stuck until someone comes to free me,
    my mind races like a busy bee,
    it is almost as if I am transparent,
    an body that is efferent,
    I am stuck in this madness,
    alone in all this sadness,
    until the day i am rescued

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    wildpendigus commented on My Life is a Zoo

    06-17-2009

    I think this one is very good shows how talented you are, I'm here in Hawaii, but have relatives in Ingelwood, CA, you could turn this poem into a nice song, I have been in music for years, producing and writing so take it from me , and worked with many famous people! Congratulations if you want to record it let me know I'll give my assistance grecowong@yahoo.com

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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