school

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    school

     bleeding deathly pain inside
    but now without permission
    my eyes start to cry
    sitting alone in a room thats filled
    a few glances is all
    no questions of care
    as if im just not there
    its the end of this class
    now walking away the teacher wont
    dare to ask me to stay
    but this school is so great
    or so they say

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    lonewolf commented on school

    11-28-2009

    life is a 2 way street , sweetie. sometimes people dont always notice the pain, but its ok to ask to talk with someone. keep your chin up, you'll be ok. this i s a good write.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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