freeze

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freeze

when blood runs cold
and faces freeze
my heart stops beating
i fall to my knees
everything stops
and i cant breath
things are lost
never to be seen

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Nadia1986 commented on freeze

11-28-2009

Short but very chilly and creepy it makes me think of freezing to death or falling through the ice and then meeting a cold frozen end. Nice work.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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