Scared 4 U

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  • Lost Love

    Scared 4 U

    In all that we go thru and in all that we say,
    with ur help, I've learned 2 love more with each passing
    Day
    Ur instructions go on with me, ur voice echoes in me,
    I try so hard to follow in ur steps and imitate what I
    See
    In u, I found me and through u I have learned to care,
    Ur lessons have taught me true value and now I know life's not Fair
    I can't bear 2 lose u and i pray for ur safety,
    Without u I know that there is no
    Me
    U are my other half and u complete me,
    Nana u are everything that I strive 2 be
    Ur strength and ur wisdom guide my dreary path
    Picture me without u- no solution- u do the math
    1 brain, no body, that's a mystery untold,
    Stay here with me and watch u and I
    Unfold
    A legend in my eyes, a story lost 4 many years
    We're heading in a direction filled with many sad
    Tears
    I cannot wait until ur gone 2 u
    U already know, that deep down in my heart and on the surface, I truly love u
    4 u i am scared and 4 u I cry,
    Worried and torn, in bed I
    Lie
    I am scared and I can't hide it from u,
    If u leave me here alone, I don't know what I'll do
    So yes, I am scared 4 u,
    and while ur still here, I plan 2 do that I can
    Do!

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    hdmac commented on Scared 4 U

    07-11-2009

    Long poem. I don't like the way you put the abbreviations all the way throughout it-it looks like a text message.

    poetic89justiss

    12/09/2009

    I can appreciate your comment. Sorry it took so long to respond. I can also appreciate the fact that some of the greatest poets, such as Tupac Shakur, abbreviated many words throughout a poem to make them appear smaller and draw more attention to words with more meaning. So... thanks for the feedback, but I like my poem just the way it is.

    SusanLee commented on Scared 4 U

    03-04-2009

    I dug it,and worth merit. Inventive and Nuveau

    poetic89justiss

    12/09/2009

    Thank you

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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