Right In Time With Mine

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    • deedeemcgee
    • writes as a release, that is what has gotten me this far in life, some I can write here, but most are personal reminders of past and future and an outlet to make better choices these days.

    Right In Time With Mine

     Your far, far away...
    but I can feel your heart beating,

    Right in time with mine.

    I walkd away from you,
    I said good-bye
    No matter how I pretend
    I still can feel your heart beating,
    Right in time with mine.

    I hide yu away in a little corner
    you are always there, right by my side
    I can feel your heart beating,
    right in time with mine.

    Your in my heart, your in my soul
    Your sweet, sweet smile I see, 
    Your heart I feel,
    I feel it beating strong

    Right in time with mine.

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    laydbak1 commented on Right In Time With Mine

    10-23-2009

    I love the sentiments in this piece... Syncopated love... It gets no finer... A very nice short write.... Kudo's from here...
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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