My Own Little Secret

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    • deedeemcgee
    • writes as a release, that is what has gotten me this far in life, some I can write here, but most are personal reminders of past and future and an outlet to make better choices these days.

    My Own Little Secret

    As through the woods I wander
    Looking behind the trees......for you.
    I hear the thunder up above
    Your not there behind and I know.

    i pick up pace and begin to run from nothing
    but towards you, You are not to be found,
    Your not there and I know.

    You finally moved on
    but I can still feel your love
           surrounding me.

    No one sees my pain
    It's all locked up inside
    My own little piece of you.

    The rain begins to pour and I stop
    I look into the sky
    stop dead in my tracks
    I fall to my knees and I cry

    I cry for the love that I've lost,
    The love of my life is gone
    I sent him away

    now I endure the silent pain
    but in the woods my tears can flow

    Noe one can see,
    No one can hear
    No one knows how I still love you.....so

    I will always love you

    shhhhhhhhhhhhh

    My own little secret.

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    lonewolf commented on My Own Little Secret

    11-27-2009

    the imagery for this poem is excellent. i can see you searching through the trees for that special someone. very good write

    deedeemcgee

    11/27/2009

    thank you

    Platti commented on My Own Little Secret

    10-28-2009

    I really liked this poem, especially how you used the woods to be your own little hiding place to show your true feelings normally hidden, very good write. Thanks =]

    deedeemcgee

    10/29/2009

    Thank you, I feel you have your own little patch of woods.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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