Remnants.

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The reason fore this poem is a neigbor of a friend of mine, He was talking about him and pretty much challenged me to write about him.

Remnants.

Endless days in a suspended life,
Each passing minute cuts like a knife,
A constant wait to make a connection,
Perhaps a remnant of some affection.

Like an Albatross, the desolation,
Punishment of a lifelong isolation,
Sentence for an unforgivable crime,
The visage is now no more than a mime.

Hours deemed to pass as years do to all,
Awaiting patiently the last call,
A life wasted in regret and pain,
The ninth circle he must eternally sustain.

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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