Remember Me.

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    Remember Me.

    Reminising on a love from my past,
    No hard feelings, it just was not ment to last,

    I hope you have became all you ever wanted to be,
    Sometimes I still wonder if you think about me,

    Yesterday I saw an eagle soaring through the sky above,
    It reminded me of you, my first love,

    Reckless, defiant, wild, and free,
    And I hope that is how you remember me.

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    retrogeegee commented on Remember Me.

    05-13-2009

    Ah, I like the image of the former love as an eagle. The grammar and spelling needs cleaning up. I think you have misspelled reminiscing in line one and became should be become in line three. These are just mechanics. I think the tone and rhythm are great. Keep writing!

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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