remember me in the morning

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    remember me in the morning

    Remember me in the morning, when the sun begins to rise

    Know that ill be waiting, ill never leave your side.

    Im the unexpected chill, im your smile without a cause.

    Ill be your silent soldier, to catch you when you fall.

    When the wind blows your hair and the sun warms your cheeks,

    close your eyes and rest, know always there ill be.

    Clinging close to help you on days you "cant" get through

    To guide you for eternity, this I promised in "I do"

    So remember me in the morning, forever yours ill be

    Look closely to the sun, to catch a glimpse of me.

    Shaina Nichole Johns
    Copyright ©2008 Shaina Nichole Johns

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    badron11 commented on remember me in the morning

    08-23-2013

    That last line is so good. You knew I'd be coming here to read these lol.

    shainaj

    08/24/2013

    Thanks

    shainaj commented on remember me in the morning

    08-22-2013

    I want to thank you all for the feed back. Its certainly not perfect but I'm glad it's appreciated.

    Artie commented on remember me in the morning

    11-22-2009

    This is a nice piece - I like your view of devotion - 10 from me

    shainaj

    08/22/2013

    Thank you. Glad to see someone take interest .

    BobbyRockwar commented on remember me in the morning

    05-14-2009

    Marvelous. Well said and done!!!

    shainaj

    08/22/2013

    Thank you very much :)

    sk commented on remember me in the morning

    03-21-2009

    Great rhyme and imagery.

    shainaj

    08/22/2013

    Thanks .

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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