REFLECTIONS

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    REFLECTIONS

    To see the pain that feels your heart the inside turned upside down.
    The wounds in which were inflicted by harm the things that whirl around in your heart.
    To see is not always foreseen wanting to touch is not always to touch.
    Knowing the things you see your body do but sometimes you always feel like someone is looking at you.
    The movement is so precise that it almost seems unreal, but for every turn and twist that person never misses
    The big eyes the full lips the smile or frown that shown is the skin you see really there.
    You stand and wonder if there is another world beyond the one you know.
    As you focus in and wonder is he or she feeling what I am feeling you never know.
    For every dream there is a dreamer and for every song there is a singer and for every thought there is a thinker.
    You pull the eye and pinch the noise who is this person some times you ask that question.
    But when you look closer you will see that the person staring at you is your ownself. 

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    knight4696 commented on REFLECTIONS

    09-20-2009

    Great insight into man's plight with questioning ones self - liked this one a lot - my favorite line "For every dream there is a dreamer and for every song there is a singer and for every thought there is a thinker" Great job

    optimistic commented on REFLECTIONS

    08-25-2009

    I like the thought and the fact that everyone can have there own interpretation very well written.

    papapaczki commented on REFLECTIONS

    08-25-2009

    This is real good. I think Bforibus said it right about creating chaos. I like the line about wanting to touch is not always to touch. Makes you think.

    Singcanary commented on REFLECTIONS

    08-25-2009

    Bg26 Very true...some people wear two faces...one on the inner and one on the outer...except "I" ...what u see is what u get! love your words and persceptive on reality. nicely done girl!

    bforibus commented on REFLECTIONS

    08-25-2009

    this poem goes to something i tell everyone. that we as a people are all the same. making something bigger of something then it really is makes chaos. i loved the doubt and fear emotions that were poured over this poem. it really does reflect on what im sure everyone has felt at lest once in their lives. great job

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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