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  • Let Go

    FREE

    Make yourself at home, since you're the ruler!
    You're extra fierce, extra gorgeous and, yes, maybe even extra wild now.
    With your certain someone by your side who knows what might happen?
    As the surroundings become your playground.
    The grass as green becomes the bed so full and free.
    The birds are the music which your body can move to.
    And the wind OH how it wraps you with it's delicate breeze.
    As you both lie there pulse racing, eyes open wide.
    You can see the excitement in each others eyes.
    The sweat he drips drives you insane while the sounds you make he can't tame.
    You both are like the furnace SO blazing hot inside.
    That you can't let go of the fire and desire inside.

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    bforibus commented on FREE

    08-25-2009

    sounds like a blissful moment. it was very visual. and calm. it seems like something as passionate as this it could be more colorful. but a great write none the less.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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