Reflection

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Reflection

A reflection on life in which it stands,
A crazed up world lies in our hands.
Dreams we dream can only be what we choose not only see.
We hold the power to make a future of reality not just fantisy.
Many opportunities waiting to be taken,
Yet, overlooked and passed behind.
Take a step back,
You will see,
All you ever wanted to be.
Keep your head up,
In a world so messed up.
You and only you hold the key.
The strong will be strong and travel along,
The weak will be weak and will continue to seek,
Control your life,
Don't let life control you.
Step up and take the lead,
A reflection upon life is all you need.

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windsongs commented on Reflection

10-12-2013

this write is great:)

DeepEclipse commented on Reflection

09-18-2009

I always find confidence if I remember where I come from. Odds always seem to be against the honest one, but they live more free. I like your push against the world. Motivating.

fred1932 commented on Reflection

08-29-2009

i was just browsing, baby, this is beautiful as you are attractive

AmandaY7 commented on Reflection

06-30-2009

Hello, My name is Amanda. I just joined this site. I see you live in Vancouver,Wa. I just moved back from there in August. I was reading your poem and I thought of it as very inspirational and thought provoking. I was wondering if you would post more poems being that I like yours very much.

zakito commented on Reflection

02-15-2009

no sta loca bonita :) it is as you say here :) z :)

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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