Reckless Behavior

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Reckless Behavior

Beliieving in you
is like falling asleep at the wheel
(When the road is slick
and your brakes are bad)-
So reckless
fatal-
to my own well being-
and easy-
so easy.

I should do the responsible thing-
roll the windows down;
say goodbye-
but i keep nodding
between horn blasts
and eventually-
I rest my head
on the back of the seat-
Yawn-
and fall into believing.

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toredbloodink commented on Reckless Behavior

03-14-2017

OK now maybe I read them all not sure.... I believe that you need to write more... I hope you read these again... I know how hard it is to have faith... I'm going to self publish a book ... The talent you have is intence

Cruzado commented on Reckless Behavior

07-06-2009

WOW I must say that your poem sounds very deep. I thought you did a great job in wording it and you really put some feeling behind it.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

LluviaPhoenix’s Poems (19)

Title Comments
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No One Can Understand 2
Reckless Behavior 2
I Smile for You 4
I Remember the Days 1
To Be a Muse 1
There's No Beauty in the Breakdown 3
Celtic Background Music 1
You Told Me It Would Be This Way 2
Untitled 1
What Keeps Me Alive 0
Confused, With My Head Ducked in Laughter 1
In That Instant 0
Tattered Perfection 2
Criticism 1
Good Ol' Life Experience 0
Confusion 1
Words 1
Standing 0
Untitled 1