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    In this life I have been able to bring rain to dry areas.  A;ways wondered why, then was told about being sacrificed in another llife--Mayan--to bring blessings on the crops.  Was this why I always had a fear of deep water?

    RAINMAKER

    "I came," she said, "because your land is black,dry as lava dust and spent as foam."

    No medicine woman. I observed Nordic blue eyse--perhaps from Minnesota--this one whose presence affected Seasons.

    "I fell a long way at Chicen Itza."

    In my mind, at her far look, I saw smooth limestone walls, the deep Cenote, felt the cold film of water close over, as bones relinquished their clawing hold and accepting, settled down.

    "A virgin, held for sacrifice, bound to the conviction--
    give the pure to Chac."

    "How?" remembering Mayan's God of Rain--"You live now!"

    "You doubt me, Senor?" she whsipered, as the first breeze rustled her leaf-like hair, and from nowhere, tear-drops of sreaning water hit the ground! 

    JOANZ

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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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