Rainbow I Am

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    Rainbow I Am

    The colors that are me
    stretch across my lively sky
    And it seems they have no importance to him
    for he is color blind


    The discomfort that his arrogance brings
    creeps in through my clouds
    I've never longed to see them gray
    or empty and devoured


    And so I stretched into a pond
    an attempt to present a bridge
    A guide to understanding
    the riches I held within


    Cleverly he climbed my back
    and slid down to the pot
    That stood at the base of the colors I form
    just beyond the rocks


    I watched him play with all my gold
    and withdrew across the way
    And by the time I reached my pot
    the thief had run away


    That day I made a promise
    in the warmth of the sun above me
    That I'd never again stretch my colors any further
    than the calm waters that lie below me

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    IAMLIKEU commented on Rainbow I Am

    08-20-2009

    Very clever, both the poem and the resolve at the end. I would have given it a 10 except at the end it did not flow as well with the repetition of me for rhyme. Perhaps you could say the same thing in an even more powerful way if you changed it. Apart from that, perfect.

    SAYANDSEE commented on Rainbow I Am

    05-12-2009

    COLORFUL YOU ARE INDEED. I LEFT THE GOLD, FOR A THIEF I AM NOT. KEEP COLORING.

    AltisConners commented on Rainbow I Am

    11-25-2008

    I enjoyed the imagery and the plays on colors. Lovely.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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