rain drops

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    rain drops

    Rain Drops

     

     

    did you ever sit;quietly, on a front porch,
    the morning after a rain?

    noticing; the silver,crystal,drops of rain
    that cling to the leaves.
    an awesome sight for your eyes.

    like diamonds so rare!
    nuturing his creation

    hanging there until bumped!
    or his gentle wind,dries it.

    birds chirping nearby;
    their melodous song

    breaking the silence
    of a ever so still sunday morn.

    Carol Mitchell Burchett

    Copyright ©2007 Carol Mitchell Burchett

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    icu2 commented on rain drops

    11-01-2009

    Such a lovely visual this poem gives. I almost felt the raindrops spray as the tree branch was bumped! I think you captured the feel of the atmosphere after a fresh cleansing rain. Love it!

    angel2

    11/02/2009

    hello icu2~ i was sitting on my ft.porch when i wrote this and yes right after a rain.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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