Rain and Sun Thoughts

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    Rain and Sun Thoughts

    In the midst of rain
    I found myself drain
    In a pool of false puddle
    where my minds seem to meddle

    hope is the faith
    where life is not death
    enduring the pain of waiting
    in the game of living
    like the rain falling
    where new hopes growing

    Let it shine and rain
    in my little haven
    let the confuse mind
    dwell and bind
    in the darkness of night
    where hope is the knight
    with every waking hours
    I will live to the fullest!!


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    MizBlaze commented on Rain and Sun Thoughts

    11-16-2008

    You are lovely with metaphors. Maybe you could give me some feedback?

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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