"UNFAITHFUL"

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    "UNFAITHFUL"

    To be loved or hurt;
    But to burdden another Is unfaithful;
    To have a tear of sorrow; not think of
    tomorrow; Is unfaithful;
    too be surprised but, not,
    To dream a dream that rots; Is that
    not a love or hurt of unfaithful;
    To be or not to be careful but unbearable,
    Is that or Is that not unfaithful,
    To have a glass reflection that crush,
    Is that or Is It unfaithful?
    But not credulity that he/she Isn't
    unfaithful,
    Or unfaithful just feel like a off-hand,
    Compactoer In the eye's or heart of anther.

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    StraytRootz commented on "UNFAITHFUL"

    02-18-2009

    I'm sorry, but I didn't really get this one. It started off well, but it lost me along the way. The grammar is off. Run it through spell check and then recite it out loud or record it. If it still doesn't sound right, rework it. All poems are continuous works in progress.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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