"The Day We Died"

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  • Death

    "The Day We Died"

    I Stood there knowing deep inside,

    The Pain in my heart would not subside.

    I heard the gunshot

    I heard you yell,

    My heart it jumped and I ran like hell...

    From your mouth there was no sound

    so I picked the gun up off the ground.

    I pulled the trigger then I fell,

    I wasn't doing very well.

    They tried to do the best they could,

    but I died

    I knew I would.

    Now I'm with the one I love,

    Right here in heaven above!!

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    Paradice21 commented on "The Day We Died"

    11-01-2009

    This was very sad yet I loved the flow of it and it was written very Nicely! Job well done!‎
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