"Mistaken Identity"

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    "Mistaken Identity"

    ~~You are not who you betray to be, with acts as if I am the enemy. Fully disguised as the innocent so helpless. Why not have pity for me throughout my tragedy? Ya know no'one suffers more than me, going through the notion of taking different potions to avoid what I can, even being with someone's man. So please! help me to understand because I have the upper hand to gratify the ultimate lie of betrayal and deceit. This is a baaed case of "mistaken identity."
    ~~The background you possess is vicarious with imaginative participation, leaving you blind of the doubt of hesitation! Don't you see it's damming your true destination? Therefore I ask, How could you be true to me and not yourself, just playing the hand that you were dealt? Without no questions or concerns this should be at least one lesson learned if you want to surpass all situations at hand, But should I expect you to understand, that with all the trials and tribulations~ Your true "Identity" has been
    "mistaken"

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    Qualin commented on "Mistaken Identity"

    08-03-2009

    THIS IS MORE LIKE IT VERY GOOD WRITE...QUALITY OF SUBJECT MATTER..FLOWING RYTHM AND RHYME...GOOD WRITE...QUALIN

    flyblackbutter

    10/03/2009

    Thanks Q. This was inspired by the evil of beings who portray to be something or someone they are not. "A lie to a face" not asked for by many.

    rrevans09 commented on "Mistaken Identity"

    07-10-2009

    Hey there fellow-south Mississippian! I really enjoyed this poem. A poetic revelation, it is. Keep your guard up; cause there's ALOT of folks running loose projecting images which lead to mistaken identity. I know your mama told you, "don't judge a book by it's cover?" Well, that's not just about good things inside. It's also because ugly things that are often wrapped in pretty packages. Anyway, enjoyed reading your perspective on mistaken identity.

    flyblackbutter

    07/13/2009

    Hi! and thanks for taking the time to read me lyrically speaking. among all of the poems out there you came to pass with mine and I appreciate that along with your interpretation. This is SAD yet TRUE

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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