"IF"

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    "IF"
    if i can't change myself, then the world can't change me

    if i have to live my life pleasing other people, then i'm not happy with who i am.

    if all i do is think about myself then, i dont have anyone that love and cares about about.

    if i can face my enemies with no violence, then i'm consider a hero.

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    sherry122 commented on "IF"

    05-17-2009

    Nice topic, but u should have brought out your poem more creatively.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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