"IF"

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"IF"

if i can't change myself, then the world can't change me

if i have to live my life pleasing other people, then i'm not happy with who i am.

if all i do is think about myself then, i dont have anyone that love and cares about about.

if i can face my enemies with no violence, then i'm consider a hero.

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sherry122 commented on "IF"

05-17-2009

Nice topic, but u should have brought out your poem more creatively.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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