"GUARDIAN ANGEL"

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    "GUARDIAN ANGEL"

     My Family is slowly dying with no one to talk too;
    Then I look over my right shoulder to find an Guardian Angel.

    The Guardian Angel said "I am sent from above, to help you find out";
    Because there is times you will have some doubts.

    My parents, and three brothers are gone and I am all alone;
    But I turn my head and there is my Guardian Angel saying "I'm home".

    Guardian Angel speaks to let you know "I am here for you in your time of need";
    And also states "I'm going to show you love and help you plant your new seed".

    You have been several different other peoples's angel in the past;
    Now they have sent you an Guardian Angel that will last.

    "Yes", I am your Guardian Angel, "now look into my eyes";
    "I am your best friend but only in disguise".

    mary letitia green
    mgsouthard64

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    boomboom56 commented on "GUARDIAN ANGEL"

    09-21-2009

    WOW. You have captured what has been our discussions of late. I like the way you have shown the building of trust, which is so needed. Your last line says it all. Thank you for the small lesson in life that this says to me.
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    lsabeth commented on "GUARDIAN ANGEL"

    09-20-2009

    I had a hard time reading the poem. I got the message though. Some of the words seemed not well placed.
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    MrGee commented on "GUARDIAN ANGEL"

    09-20-2009

    Nice poem, however, there are grammatical errors which take away from the poems rhythmn. examples- the line that reads because there is times you have some doubts should read because there ARE times you have some doubts.also, the line- Now they have sent you an Guardian Angel that will last. would be more correct to say - they have sent you you a Guardian Angel that will last. The picture is clear however, perhaps, and this is my opinion, the poem needs to be more concise. Try to omit unnecessary words of which that are many in this poem. I admire the fact that you love to write but, you would receive much higher ratings if you take my advice and I am here to help you if you deem it necessary.
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    EinStud commented on "GUARDIAN ANGEL"

    09-20-2009

    Yes. I like it. The Guardian Angel in my life has a whole support cast of other Angels, probably because it's too much work for one Angel! They must have a Union up there? lol I feel your poem. Peace Out, EinStud
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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