"Broken"

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    "Broken"

    Satisfaction to shackles, torn and misused
    Abused burning inside heart in a fuse
    Now I'm focused struggling with a shady vision
    Hazy missions closed eyes now I'm reminising
    Heartsome, to what now, disburden this nonscence
    I use to stand tall now I'm not there like a non-fence
    Now the fence is gone, no protection from the outter world
    Broken in the center piece, breath gone but I'm still there
    Standing and demanding persistent better days......
    You evaluate there's several but we're not on the same page
    Dealing with different altications, if it's not one thing it's another
    Utilizing vague thoughts to perish from one another
    But is it wrong, obviously not I'm still standing
    I'm handling just sample this a part of my faminess
    Not a lack of food, but a lack of confidence
    I'm stumbling, forever on my feet that's so ironic
    Maybe it's a mistake, maybe I should'nt have left the nest
    Mom can help, no dad therefore I do my best
    So I put up with bad components - constituent parts,,,
    And still I'm broken........ left with a broken heart!!!!

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    orsonav commented on "Broken"

    01-23-2009

    This poem is well organized, and delivers great image of a broken individual. Overall, it is great free style. Keep up the Good Work.

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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