Q's 4 life

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    C my real dad gave me this poem thru cell bars when i was 11 and i've kept it all this time and i figured i write it down.

    Q's 4 life
    What is there to live for 
     when all you ever had is taken away in one breath?
    What does life mean 
     when the one you love doesn't love you back?
    Why should i listen 
     when it won't mean anything in my future,
     which is slowly passing me by?
    How can i consintrate on life 
     when there's nothing in life to live for
     to consintrate on?

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    winterkou commented on Q's 4 life

    01-22-2010

    This write is full of emotion, but kinda lacks substance - I see where your going though
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    rougepriest commented on Q's 4 life

    08-19-2009

    yikes live cuz your alive for starters i get the idea but it has no rhymes at all, sounds more like a cry for help, dont listen to that voice that drives you mad dude
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    sk8ergirl commented on Q's 4 life

    08-13-2009

    wow that was a great poem and i could feel all the emotion. i know how you feel i know your dad would be proud of you. i don't have a dad so i feel for this. great write
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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