Pitiful We Are

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  • Complexity
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  • Fantasy
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  • Love
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  • Anger
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  • Emotional
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  • Long Distance Romance
    • IreSunn
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    Poem Commentary

    Simple thoughts about the complexity and interference of long distance relationships.

    "The longing for something you can never have."

    Pitiful We Are

     So pitiful you are
    Pretending that you don't know me
    You swear that you don't want me anymore
    You say you never knew who I was at all

    So pitiful we are...

    So pitiful I've become
    That I can barley allow my imagination
    To wrap you in loving thoughts
    My disappointment seem to linger
    Longer than my devotion...

    Pitiful the distance
    How it came between us
    Funny how two people can want something
    So much..so hard... for so long
    Until it destroy them without any warning.


    Isn't it pitiful...

    We gave up without ever knowing
    One single touch
    A small kiss on shoulders
    We only played around with the notion of love

    Fallen...in and out of....

    Aint it so pitiful.

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    StandingBear commented on Pitiful We Are

    02-11-2011

    It's all too real in this day and age, very good write!... StandingBear
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