Buho Blanco / White Owl

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  • IreSunn
  • Is noticing the movement of the night sky.

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I tried to make this dream come to life on paper, but I'm struggling. I suppose I should play with it a bit more.

~ IreSunn
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Buho Blanco / White Owl

When it came knocking
It came dragging its feet
No proper introduction
Underneath it's wings
The absence of a stimulating conversation
Caught between rapid heart beats
So disturbing to a mind
that has become unhealthy

Who goes there?

The enemy peeps in to watch over my mental state of being
Round eyes convincing me with every sinister blink
That living has never been a part of my world
My soul at best has been dwelling inside of a
Carcass shell.

Just like a feather falling from it's wing
I find discomfort in losing the ominous part of me
Tucked so deep underneath perfect white hospital sheets
I have no choice but to befriend agony

"Who" is all that it says to me...
"Who" is all that it says to me...

Set a drift on a depressing haze
I get chills as it flies overhead
Sorrow leaks from open sores
Like sharp talons scratching at my doubtful thoughts
Intensifying my fear of the unknown even more

Who goes there?


"Who" is all that it says to me.
"Who" is all that it says to me.

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Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

IreSunn’s Poems (4)

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