PINK SLIP

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  • Lost Love

    PINK SLIP
    I WAS GIVEN MY PINK SLIP EARLY TODAY
    SHE LOST ALL HER FEELINGS
    WAS ALL SHE COULD SAY
    SHE GOES ON WITH LIFE
    AS IF I NEVER EXISTED
    YET AFTER ALL THIS TIME
    I'M SHATTERED AND TWISTED
    HOW LONG WILL IT TAKE
    FOR MY LOVE TO DIE OUT
    SHE WAS NO MISTAKE
    MY HEART HAS NO DOUBT
    ASIDE SHE HAS CAST ME
    AS IF NO ONE SHE KNEW
    LOCKED OUT OF HER MIND
    WITHOUT EVEN A CLUE.
    THE NEW LOVE TAKES OVER
    LEAVES THE OLD ONE TO ROT
    ITS HARD TO BELIEVE
    THE THINGS SHE FORGOT
    WHEN ALL YOUR LIFES MEANING
    GETS TIED IN A KNOT
    TO ME THE WORLD WAS ALL THAT SHE MEANT
    SO WHY DOES THIS PAIN IN MY HEART STILL TORMENT

    Copyright ©2009 Robert Longinetti





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    Isaiahjanae commented on PINK SLIP

    02-02-2010

    This is a well written poem about a love lost. True love is hard to find, true love can make us feel blind. Be thankful in all things, if even while receiving a Pink Slip. A person can do us a favor, by some times, just leaving us behind. Then we can go on w/ life & find another love.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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