Perfect Moment

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  • Love

    Perfect Moment

    His arms around me~
    tight~
    I feel safe~
    His body~
    His warmth~
    radiating~
    Where his hands touch my bare arms~
    leaves a tingling trail~
    Evaporating from his shirt~
    that smell~
    filling my nostrills~
    fogging my eyesight~
    His hot breath on the back of my neck~
    goosebumps~
    Falling asleep~
    I'm safe here~
    With the love of my life~
    Roberto~

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    Phoenix9 commented on Perfect Moment

    01-13-2009

    very well done, keep up the good work

    kenparme commented on Perfect Moment

    12-24-2008

    Good poem-very expressive-don't sell yourself short-good work.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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