Peaceful

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    Peaceful
    Sound of gun metal
    Escaping fro the eyes
    Fade to the sky
    .......Clutches.........
    How peaceful, how great
    The golden heavens
    .......Die.........

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    Tempestlady commented on Peaceful

    06-02-2009

    Too vague. Need more meat and meter. Give me more clues as to what is it visual?, or emotional?, Just too skinny for me. Like a stick man, i get the idea, but nothing is clear.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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