Passion in Blk & White

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    Passion in Blk & White

    Words gave chase to my heart

    Passion unleashed in blk and white

    I could feel the power of his thoughts

    Fire rises within and I am loosin control

    His words…. engulf me

     Like one spark to a cigarette

    I inhaled nouns verbs and metaphors

    Exhaling synonyms adverbs and pronouns

    He…… touched my soul

    His thoughts grazed the small of my back

    The rhythm of the rhyme felt like dancing fingers

    Gliding slowly towards the rounds of my breast

    My lips quivered legs trembling thighs sliding from a lustful sweat

    He was poetry personified

    Words gave chase to my heart

    Intimate thoughts revealed in blk and white

    Letters gave birth to words with insight

    His intelligence mentally stimulated me

    My mind massaged by the essential word oils of aromatherapy

    I had climaxed and slowly floated down to relax

    Laying in a rose bed of mental bliss

    His words his rhyme gave chase to my heart

    But his thoughts captivated my mind

     

                                            Do you hear me

                                             Zahirme

     

     

     

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    BlaQReign commented on Passion in Blk & White

    10-03-2009

    Indeed, you're a the truth:-) Enjoyed the word play in this one as well....Do that that it is that you do, so well:-) BlaQ

    zahirme031

    10/04/2009

    Thank you so much for your kind words on both of my favorite pieces .It is always a pleasure being recognised by your piers and respected as an artist . Have a wonderful day my friend in poetry......Zahirme

    hubbleclub commented on Passion in Blk & White

    05-26-2009

    lovely thoughts and valuable language...you have volume and sensitivity in your prose poems... it is great to be nspired by your honesty

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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