Paradise

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    Paradise
    Dark angel looking over my shoulder
    Beautiful stranger with musky perfume

    Promise between paradise and purgatory
    Voice like honey poured over coals

    Champagne lingering on my lips
    Pleasure drunk from the tongue

    Diamond night among the heavens
    Island rhythm Fantasy Sea

    Fevered passion of a flavored kiss
    Blue moon embracing the night wind

    Magnificent aroma of life
    Remembered as a dream that never ends

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    Hoosierpoet commented on Paradise

    08-10-2009

    Some beautiful words and phrases here. I especially liked the "flavored kiss" and "blue moon embracing night wind". Moses
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    StandingBear commented on Paradise

    05-31-2009

    A delightful, romantic encounter to never be forgotten .. whether real or dreamed. "Blue moon embracing the night wind". Great line. Great write. 10
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    Cheri

    06/07/2009

    Thank you for the great comment. I really enjoy your poetry also.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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