Paradise

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    Paradise



    I smell the salt,

    I hear the waves,

    The wind whistles through the caves.

    Under the sun,

    In the heat.

    I feel the sand on my bare feet.

    The fish are vibrant,

    The water's cool,

    It forms a soft whirlpool.

    The hammocks rock,

    The soft wind blows.

    The peace around you really shows.

    The open bar,

    The smell-good dinner,

    I get a sunburn from the water's shimmer.

    Colorful crabs,

    And puffer fish.

    A million tiny Jellyfish.

    The sun's less hot,

    It's time to go,

    This was the most relaxing place, I'll ever know.

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    bshamby commented on Paradise

    10-05-2009

    very relaxing to read and made me want to go to the beach light and airy

    bforibus commented on Paradise

    01-24-2009

    it diffently sounded tranquil. so relaxing. those colors were warm and sweet. nice write just wish it sung more

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