PARADISE LOST

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PARADISE LOST

Why bother growing old and wise
There is no life in paradise

You will receive a big surprise
There is no fun in paradise

Don't worry when you cast your dice
There is no choice in paradise

Why bother living clean and nice
It's hot like hell in paradise

So hurry up and live in vice
There is no guilt in paradise

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nellakh commented on PARADISE LOST

03-19-2010

Life is short, use it to your advantage!

jyothi commented on PARADISE LOST

02-11-2010

It's simple and meaning full-----------------------------------------------poem.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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CANNIBAL 1
GOOD-BYE 0
PLAY IN INNOCENCE 0
MY DREAM 0
ENDING 1
PAIN 0
PARADISE LOST 2
IN THE SUBWAY 0
I DON'T WANT TO SAY GOOD-BYE 1
HALF AND HALF 0
SCHEHERAZADE 2

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