pain

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topic in my poetry group

pain

what is pain?

pain is when your heart is in a trama room
with doctors working to revive you

Pain is when a family member dies an theres nothing you can do but cry

pain is when you fall in love with someone who doesnt fall in love with you 

pain is that feeling you bottle up when u cant do anything else so you let stress biuld up until you explod

pain is not knowing if your gonna make it til your kids turn 18

pain is liveing in a shelter with no help from family members

pain is when you get to hold your stillborn child until you cant bare it any more  and just break down alone in your room at night

pain is when you think you have finally mad it over the hump an you reach another

pain is when you know your doing right but everything seems to keep going wrong

pain is when you cant sleep at night because your children are in the room crying an you dont know why

so when you say im in pain think twice have you seen real pain or are you just sore then decide are you really in pain

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