Outside My Window

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Outside My Window

        Outside my window
            beauty takes place,
            as the light transistions
            from sun-yellow to opaque.

        Millions of white flurries
            crash and collide,
            falling,jumping
            from bluish-grey skies.

        As if escaping
            from winter's cage,
            a calming quiet
            like lavender and sage.

        At Daytona pace,they race
            landing, scattered
            high and low
            edges of rooftops,glistening glow.

        Porches and yards
           soon painted white,
           like the artist's canvas
           that sits at night.....

        Waiting for what will come
            Mother Nature's discovery
             pine tree sprinkled so deliciously,
             eye candy for the soul...
              look..and watch it just be.

                                  Lynn A. 2/06

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optimistic commented on Outside My Window

08-10-2009

This was awesome the ryhme and imagery in this poem is good I would not mind being there one day.

photogirl

08/20/2009

thank you optimistic...I am late getting back on this site...and happy to see comment from you. Still to post my other poems and can't wait to read more of yours. Yes- come and visit winter. You have interesting thoughts...we might write a good summer nature poem together! Thanks.

BILLY28 commented on Outside My Window

07-28-2009

Thank you Photogirl, I really like the flow ,the ryhym,the words fit so nicely. I am able to see this happining from inside my little apt. above the garage in wherevervill. Thank you; Billy28

photogirl

07/28/2009

thank you Billy28..my 1st poem posted and 1st commemt,too. I also live 2nd floor,small space...but view of all seasons is awesome! I will check out your site soon...thanks!!

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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