Optimism

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    • UnrefinedYet
    • is refreshed. showed the kid inside me today, playing with water with little kids. XD

    Optimism

    She would stop and stare,
    Only to realize there was nobody there.
    So she keeps the love she really wants to share,
    Until she finds a reason to really care.
    But then life may never be fair,
    A feeling she tends to secretly fear.
    So this is a burden she must bear.
    Something no one else can compare.
    And from her eyes, falls a tear,
    From her lips, a prayer,
    That this feeling may disappear
    And that finding Peace will bring her somewhere...

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    Rhymer commented on Optimism

    12-19-2009

    A deep heart felt poem nice write one I truly enjoyed. A little sad but exceellent 10 from me.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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