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    I said "Open me up"
    Do you not understand?
    Because I can not find myself. Everyday I wake ,I look and see the image in the mirror. You know the one? The worn down shell that looks at you as if you never existed. Yeah that's me.
    I continue to amaze myself ,always giving the excuse," It'll be a better day."
    Right. It's always the same and never ever changed. It's more like acne one day just one, next a whole cluster of complete chaos. Yep, that's me a pimple.(Blackhead or white)
    But really, its not all bad .
    I just make it worse then what it appears. But continue to open myself up and give it hope. Will I ever find the being inside who can decifer my fate? Who know's?
    But maybe one day someone will open me up and find the real me.
    So please " Open Me Up,,,Please!"

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    FranzJ commented on Open

    10-14-2009

    I like it. It sounds like me too. I know the feeling well.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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