Open up

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    Open up

    I wanted to say thank you for today,
    and let you know I am still in love with you..... ok?
    Even though my heart was broke,
    I feel I could have avoided this if I just had spoke.
    So just to remind you of how beautiful you are,
    and let you know where ever you go I wont be far.
    Please dont be scared to open up and show me your other side,
    you might be surprised of what you learn when you dont have to hide.

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    DeeVoelkel commented on Open up

    07-29-2009

    Sweet, short, but very much to the point. I enjoy it because it lacks the flowery crap most put in a "love and lost" poem. Excellent read!

    jannifer commented on Open up

    06-08-2009

    this makes me feel u did good i mean great i love this check out my poems.........................................................

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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