Only Death

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    Only Death

    Sinking deeper into depression, it feels like a rapid regression to the opression vanquished from my life years ago. Spirit is broken, nay shattered beyond repair. Feel so hallow, so meager, so weak. My very essence seems to have been destroyed. Vanished like a ghost into thin air.
    Searching for a glimpse of my reflection in every window, every mirror; can't seem to find it anywhere. Eyes worn out from crying, so sick of trying. Fed up with playing pretend; Have to be an android to be his friend.
    Wonder if this will ever end. Feeling more than defeated, resources completely depleted. Tears once fell down like rain. Soul has been demolished by anger and pain.
    I am but a shell of what I used to be. Deminished to nothing more than a drone, utterly numb to this misery. suspended here only by time, withstanding punishment having commited no crime.
    Life force dwindling with each shallow breath. Eyes growing dim, skin lack luster and dull. Soon there will be nothing left. Only death.

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    emwks commented on Only Death

    06-16-2009

    Only Death will seem like some left but LIFE is only something . Your poetic song is sung in the night but you can get it right if you'll sing at mornings light. read and rate my poems,too--emwks

    kenparme commented on Only Death

    05-07-2009

    This poem really captures the pain. A sad but great piece.

    sorcererofmagic commented on Only Death

    04-18-2009

    I can relate to your pain. It would be nice to hold a candle to one's darkest chamber, if only it would stay lit. siaka

    lonewolf commented on Only Death

    02-13-2009

    another great write from a very talented poet.

    drewking commented on Only Death

    01-25-2009

    good piece of work... so sad...

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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