Oh you all need it spelled out?
Yes metaphor is a lost art these days
to complicated or subtle
and your lost
most minds are slag left after smelting
the pure metal is rare
see the mainstream
a torrent of lemmings pursuing
some failed escapade of nationalistic fury
or religionistic psychic sadism
Where is the aliteration?
where is the metaphor?
I am a firey tongue
burning up words
and revealing obtuse emotion
blissed elation
Let these thoughts give you a hair cut
and show the empty cavern
where a brain should be...
to complicated or subtle
and your lost
most minds are slag left after smelting
the pure metal is rare
see the mainstream
a torrent of lemmings pursuing
some failed escapade of nationalistic fury
or religionistic psychic sadism
Where is the aliteration?
where is the metaphor?
I am a firey tongue
burning up words
and revealing obtuse emotion
blissed elation
Let these thoughts give you a hair cut
and show the empty cavern
where a brain should be...
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