Nothing New Under the Sun

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    • is glad to have written this last poem, glad that it is how I feel, more myself somehow

    Nothing New Under the Sun

    When the sun comes up,
    it’s always a new day –
    another chance to
    say what you need to say.

    Be a better you,
    who makes the best of it.
    Smiling all the while,
    just want to make things fit.

    Still Night ever falls,
    no matter what you try.

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    jescherr commented on Nothing New Under the Sun

    07-03-2009

    Good thought process. It reads a little clunky. Expand!
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    Allwhethergirl

    07/04/2009

    Thanks for your advice. This was a 4am spinout, and I was actually feeling pretty clunky when I wrote it so I wanted it to sound that way, off-putting, leaving off the send rhyme on the last line, cutting you off as you read it... But yes, I agree with work this could be much better! It was just somethng I jotted down and figured I would finally use this account and post one!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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