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    THIS IS A POEM I WROTE FOR A GIRL I WAS WITH, OF COURSE I WROTE AND GAVE IT TO HER AFTER WE BROKE UP.

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    I had a girl just recently

    who treated me just right

    she made feel so special

    by the way she'd hold me tight


    She's a very unique person

    who is actually quite rare

    with her sparkling eyes, her brilliant smile

    and light brown strands of hair


    She has a lovely personality

    a sens of humor so great

    a very caring attitude

    and a heart so void of hate


    I should have treated her right

    instead i caused her pain

    I wish i could turn back the hands of time

    so our love would remain the same


    Quintana, im sorry and i wish you happiness

    I really, really do

    I guess all thats left to say is . . . .

    I miss, and will always love, you.

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    cmlestrade commented on none

    08-10-2009

    Very nice, the font was so tiny it was hard to read but the sentiment and expressions of lost love were captured very nicely.

    heather1

    08/13/2009

    thank you

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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