New Truths

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Different than my last...

New Truths

I am no longer hidden
I feel bare against the cold
my lies no longer save me
and my own soul I've sold
I may not ask forgiveness
as it is a luxury i cannot deserve
so instead, I'l repent, my last drop I'll preserve
The blood, how it runs deep
more black than it is red
reaching my heart as venom instead
my comely throat, slit by your scorns
my beautiful rose, covered with swords
the truths I have told
The lies i have dreaded
and the venom flows faster, deeper imbedded
forget what I was, what I am, and will be
Please see me as I am unable to show
I dont know what I am, or which way to go
I've created a black hole
And its beauty surpasses that of my soul

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ZephyrWind commented on New Truths

02-28-2011

Excellent job Rikky! You never cease to amaze me. :) ~Kay

sk8erpoet commented on New Truths

02-28-2011

great write....i can relate to it to some extent..keep writing...sk8

Shelbylolann commented on New Truths

02-28-2011

This was a great read... I suppose Ican relate. Keep up the good work. ......... ShelbyGirl

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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