Nevermore Earthbound

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Not much to say on this one - obviously another love poem. I need a new subject! :-)

Nevermore Earthbound

Nevermore Earthbound

 

 

Nimble fingers negotiate

nerve transmissions.

Gentle invaders in a world

Of endless possibilities.

Shakespeare relived – recollections

of unrequited love – ridiculous

Now.

 

Majestic moments manipulate

time.  Catatonic.

Foolish yesterday with its

inconsequential concerns – blocks

of buildings held with the

mortar of elapsed time.

 

She in the center of a

center-less universe.  Ever-changing

to entice me further.

I live within

her eyes.  A gentle gathering

of  brandeis blue molecules – a

soft world

care catching.  Penetrating power –

speechless.  Wonderment welling

from within.  Trapped in a less

significant world where words

lose powerful feelings.

 

A sensual being encased

in an ecstasy inducing form

moving in grace

and lightness.  Movement

manifests in shades of light,

a free floating spirit coloring flower

petals and providing motion to

trees bending and singing her praises.

 

A euphoric embrace.

Childhood relived.

Autonomous man exists only in the mind.

The incomplete completed.  A ½ spin molecule

Turned twice

To show its full self.

Tear of happiness shed

by a holding heart.

 

Ah…to live within her world!

Her arms provide a boundless boundary.

I, within these boundaries,

am transformed into a shaking leaf

falling from trees, wandering through space,

attracted by gravity but upheld

by her powers of persuasion.

 

Never again shall I

venture to the ground for comfort –

now the expanse of space is my home.

Drifting devotes

feelings or grandeur – nevermore Earthbound.

 

 

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Nevermore Earthbound

09-23-2010

Very nicely written and and it was romantic yet full of longing. It was like you lived in a paradox world.

TonyZeski

09/23/2010

Thank you. It was definitely heartfelt.

Dano commented on Nevermore Earthbound

09-23-2010

i like your use of metaphors in this... your word choices kept the flow of it moving along nicely... well written

TonyZeski

09/23/2010

Thanks. I tried to use a lot of alliteration.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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