Never again my friend!

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    Never again my friend!

    I'm so tired of this. I can't explain how insane you make me feel, you make me yeild and take a step back, when all I want to do is persue you. I knew this was a game, it always is. I can't pretend like I didn't open myself up for you, I should have kept my mouth shut. Silence was better. Never again my friend!

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    KingGeorgeII commented on Never again my friend!

    07-21-2009

    Short and sweet but a huge impact of what you are saying. Good write! One suggession, put your work in poetry form. True, you are telling a story but it is poetry and you should get the most out is it! Very Good! If you have time check out my first book website at www.LifeisHurricanes.com Have you thought about publishing your work? Holla back!

    MsAlexander

    07/24/2009

    Thank you... I love when people show their interest, and I love constructive critisim.! I will definately look at your work.

    christliked commented on Never again my friend!

    07-14-2009

    Seeking but never finding body yerning and mind wondering dont try to hide your heart it can not grow without love keep searching

    MsAlexander

    12/22/2010

    thank you. I needed that

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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